Adventure Story
Written on October 6, 2009 – 3:46 am | by seanisme
Hooray yay”! The crowd cheered enthusiastically as the helicopter soared in it 3 VIP’s not knowing that in a few moments their lives would change forever! Kelsey the blond haired fashion freak was having her 76 pound mirror held up by her body guard who war mumbling, “they don’t pay me enough to do this job” as Kelsey looked for a microscopic disorder in her makeup.
Meanwhile josh slunk his head in some new video game, his dad would say
“Back when I was a boy we didn’t have fancy toys like that.
All of the sudden lighting crackled and sparks flew, everything spun around like a mad circus ride! Then everything was still, absolutely still. The 3rd VIP, Max was not hurt but confused, for he had been sleeping on the trip there.
He lifted his overly large head and then KUNK! And just like that he was sleeping within 3 seconds.
It wasn’t long before ‘they woke up the next morning. Kelsey was shouting at her bodyguard explaining why it was all his fault, Josh was blasting the song “help” on his IPod and Max was rubbing his head .
“Fool” Kelsey continued well die out here, we’ll never get out. We’ve got no food we’ve got no food we’ve got no water and worst of all we’ve got no shopping malls!”Kelsey screamed… and fainted.
“Don’t you know anything you stupid animal” Max screamed at Kelsey.
“There’s no hope Kelsey said grimly and began to dig herself a grave in the sand.
Out of the 3 only 1 was calm and that was Max who was taking a walk while Kelsey tried to burry herself.
“Psst over here” a voice said
“Hello is someone there” Max answered back as he looked into the edge of the forest. He flashed his light into the forest and out jumped a boy, but there was something strange about this boy he had horns.
“Yelp” the goat boy wailed!
“Who are you”? Asked Max.
“I am Grover and I have lived here fore 4500 years back when Robinson Crusoe abandoned me here”.
“I’ve heard of that story but I thought you wanted to stay here to avoid the noose?”Replied Max
“Of coarse not, would you want to stay here forever? Asked Grover.
“Wait, what do you mean 4500 years?”
“Staying on this island gives you immortality” the goat-boy said gruffly.
Just then a painful wail rang loudly through their ears
“What’s going on here”?!! Max shouted angrily
“Cannables! Run!”
They hid in the forest but Kelsey was already too deep to get out in time.
Surprisingly the canables just walked right past them.
After they were sure that they had gone they quietly approached the boat, but it was really a lead into an ambush! Suddenly the ground begun to shake and that horrible wailing rung in there ears. They ran for the boats and Max grabbed Kelsey and dragged her out of the mud as he ran past, heading for the boats Max noticed the goat –boy wasn’t there but as soon as they cast off he could see that the hole army was really an army of goat people and he thought he saw a little goat hand sticking out of a bush waving at him
2 Responses to “Adventure Story”
See I would love to see this much energy put into your class assignments.
this comment does not make me feel very good about my work. as i see it, i already try my best and put a lot of effort into my classwork.