english homework
Written on November 11, 2009 – 8:40 am | by seanisme
if i were to stay indoors all the time i would not be as bored now days. but if i had to stay indoors in the alden times i would not be very happy because you don’t have all the types of electronic gadjets of todays world.
2 Responses to “english homework”
I appreciate the fact that you are writing lots of posts and that you have taken ownership of this blog, but I really would like you to take some more time editing and really thinking about each post. Think about grammar, spelling, and really articulating your ideas clearly.
It is obvious that you quickly typed this pot in a matter of seconds, and in the future I would like for you to spend more time on each assignment.
I understand and will try to put in more effort while I am typing.